Rite of Encounter :: encounter

Rite of Encounter      Rite of Encounter is, initially a very dry and enforce fabrication. The reader is given same information repeatedly, as if it were not received the first time. This redundancy is an insult to the reader. For instance, in the very first line of the story the bank clerk tells the reader that, In the third week of his fasting, Singing- Owl found the white man (258). This information is given quite clearly, yet later the narrator repeats himself by saying, A dog meant white men (259). It is not necessary for the narrator to remind the reader. This spoon-feeding is insulting to the reader. The narration was also rather dry. There is subaltern description. The story is conveyed to the reader without any details, and quite plainly, the story is simply reported. The omniscient third person narration is also, at times, confusing. The narration occasionally dips from third person to first without any explanation. For example, when Singing- Owl is suffering of dehydration, fatigue, and hunger the narrator is reporting the condition of the character. Suddenly, the next line reads, Water. Must get water (258). It is unclear who says this. not suprisingly, Bates, employs this strange tactic again to demonstrate Singing- Owls exhaustion. The narrator comments on Singing- Owls declining condition, then says, Perhaps Im tired. All right. I am tired (261). Again, the reader is left dubious of who is speaking. This intentional alteration of narration only robs the story of unity. There is, however, one manipulation of the characters which is interesting. Smallpox is characterized beautifully. Giving life to a disease gives life to a story, which, from the beginning, is dragging on without such animation. Smallpox mocks our hero, Singing- Owl. This tormenting by a naturally inanimate character saturates the story with fantasy and mysticism. The conclusion of the story, unfortunately, leaves the reader with the same sense of disappo intment with which it was started. Singing- Owl, rather than becoming a hero, becomes a marionette for Smallpox to control. Singing- Owl breaks down and agrees to bring Smallpox back to the tribe. Even though Singing- Owl does not completely understand the methods of Smallpox, he does understand the negative repercussions. Yet, Singing- Owl grants Smallpoxs wish. This event is disappointing to the reader and degrades the main character. Singing- Owl gains some salvation by trying to infect his enemies, but is not effective and is going to die a dishonored man.